Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 43 Points (Montenegro)

Thanks God You Gave Me Too Much - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Drop wrapped wet
Cloudward driven I swelled
The cloud drew the shape
It drew the shape of my heart

Bird kissed meek
Feather light touch
The rain spell fell
And drummed in joy
It drummed the beat of my heart

So little I have to give I thought
Thanks God you gave me too much


Comments about Thanks God You Gave Me Too Much by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Rookie - 339 Points Joe Breunig (7/3/2012 9:05:00 AM)

    An enjoyable piece; loved the imagery presented; it's a wonderful reminder of the thankfulness we need to display daily, for as His Children, we're been greatly blessed; nice job.

    -Joe Breunig
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, December 12, 2011


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