That Empty Space On Your Right Poem by Allison Unknown

That Empty Space On Your Right

Rating: 5.0


Look to the right
What do you see
Is it empty
Or is it filled
I know I may have hurt you
In the past couple of years
But now Im here
To try to comfort you
Through all your fears
If you need someone
To just hold you tight
I will be there
Or if you need
A shoulder to cry on
I will be there
And comfort you
If you just need a friend
To say hello
And be there for you
Think of me
Because I will
Be that empty space
On your right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 17 December 2009

This is pretty good, but i think you have more poetential to make it better: ] idk just some advice i love ur poetry

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Arturo Vargas 16 December 2009

hey Allison, well I thought the poem was good and I felt I could really relate to it. We pass through many situations where we need something like that and I think you knew how to express that very well.

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Jonothan Queen 16 December 2009

it is a good poem, could u read mine? just look up my name jonothan queen... and feel free to read all them, cause this poem answers my calls i make in mine....

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if you're gunna be his empty space to the rite wldn't it not be empty anymore? ? lolz. i really liked this poem Allison! ! i hope i spelled ur name rite... lolz. it was well expressed and i know how u feel in this kinda situation n i hope u get to be tht empty space (even if it doesn't seem so empty) to the rite for him.

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