with a break of the heart
there's a break of the mind
you somehow lose yourself
it's like there's nothing to find
it's like a spear going through your heart
then it completely shatters and falls apart
the pieces stay broken
in every which way
you forget who you are
you can't tell night from day
the light gets darker
till its completely gone
you sit in the dark My Black Dahlia is the song
three or four minutes long
you cry and cry
till it finally slows
you just want to die
because that's how love goes.
Nice love story! Well written! 10 plus...Just don't focus on the pain, focus on love..
wow! that was so good. the rthym and words were so perfectly put together. great job :) x stella
a great expression of feelings and thoughts...........nice read!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
if it breaks ur heart then it wasnt love! ! ! love isnt supoose to do that is it? ! a debatable question.. i just strongly believe true love stays and it feels awesome :)