That time in 2019...
When hell had struck
upon my life,
the loss of two angels
had never crossed my mind.
There was a dying wish
on their beloved faces,
which I failed to retrive
while I was stuck in fear.
Time passed slowly
as they were going underneath.
My happiness was lost,
once I realized it was all real.
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Arb. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
'Time passed slowly' Some good lines, I have a question, with regard to the seriousness of the topic, what do you really want to say? Write that, write well. Some nice lines, the question is do you want to express more?
Basically I'm trying to live with the fact that some people died and I cannot make sense of it as to why? or how did they die? . I cannot believe it honestly, but life goes on and this is just another bump on the road.
Time passed slowly as they were going underneath. My happiness was lost, once I realized it was all real. a fine poem revealing depression. tony
You are such an incredible poet. I just want to say never ever stop writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hello a great poet you are very good keep it up