The Abyss Poem by Abha Sharma

The Abyss

Rating: 5.0


Space and Matter
Infinity define

Innumerous essence around

Heart exulted
Spirits alighted
Passion delineated

Alas!

Time flies

Mood flickers
Reason rambles
Uncertainty broadens

Nothingness sinks

Deep, so deep

Where?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Flora Gillingham 31 March 2008

There is such a lot in so few words. Wonderfully mind-expanding! F

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Roger Bowman 01 April 2008

Abyss abyss and mindfull fish down the cave of the abyss explorin darkness with no lease. take good care roger

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Blue angel Florida 02 April 2008

'Deep, Deep, so Deep...WHere? Where? The Abyss' - Inspiring trip :)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 April 2008

heart when exulted by the essence encircling passion seems to razzle by the trainbow so deep yet impeccable impinged within as the butterfly and its beauty as ephimeral by the time yuet not luscious green a deep scar yet an abyss as when ingrained beneath the time when mystical.luscious green.......................wondeful poem while raving in the ours of excellence, i admire the lucid art of expression,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 02 April 2008

where to? to fathomless ignorance... to resurgence... and to subsequent enlightenment... diving deep into an incredible philosophy. beautiful write, aabha.

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Roland Bastien 21 July 2009

Nothingness sinks Deep, so deep Where? ---------- We will never be able to explain what we understand from that point. We are only particle into the time womb...

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

nice one definitely thought provoking

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Sonny Rainshine 27 April 2008

Question that haunt us all. Where does 'nothingness go'? It feels heavy and appears to give us a 'sinking feeling, ' but how far can it descend? Can it also rise? Your poems are thought-provoking and expertly composed. Keep up the good work.

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2008

we cant help this eternal sinking into that hollowness...dont we have beauty to appreciate, , my view, ,

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Parable Poetry 23 April 2008

I am trying to get this, but at this point and time I think I am lost in translation.

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