The Apartment Poem by Tatiana Pimenova

The Apartment

Rating: 5.0


The apartment has suffered because of the lack of light,
Because of missing so many people who used to live in.
She has suffered because of a strange reason like the theft of the bike,
She was crying because of some people who were mean.
She was crying because of the feeling that nobody was near,
That nobody cared what will happen in her future life,
But the apartment had a soul and an ability to hear,
It was trying to support her and keep her hope alive.
She dealt with the person, whose heart was like a stone.
She was disappointed, distracted and feeling blue.
The apartment was trying to tell her, she's not alone,
But she was crying, she felt alone, she never knew.

Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 26 December 2015

what could be that apartment?

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Tatiana Pimenova 28 December 2015

There is something to think about, isn't it? Well, in my case the apartment was actually my apartment in the US, where I lived just before I left the country. I really imagined that my apartment is alive, and I have written this poem…

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 26 December 2015

A beautiful poem on loneliness drawn on lines of metaphor. Rate 10+

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Tatiana Pimenova 28 December 2015

Thank you so much for your comment!

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