Yasmeen Khan

The Bare Tree - Poem by Yasmeen Khan

In the chill of night I stand and gaze
My boughs bare sway in haze
The last fallen leaf still at my bole
Lies curled sighs at Fate’s scroll
The days are gone when I was clad
My splendor green and spring’s fad
When birds’ songs filled my heart
With pleasure deep tunes of all sort
Straw by straw they built their nests
In my leafy lap stayed blessed
My leaves kissed by gentle breeze
And washed by waters of heavenly streams
When sun showered his rays of gold
I was crowning beauty of the forest old

Then came in autumn stealthily down
My green charm lost ripped off my crown
Ruined choirs that late birds sang
On sprays and twigs where blossoms hang
Now I stand stretching my leafless arms
Longing for springtime all lost charms
For dainty boughs bursting in blooms
Wails piteous for wind-blown leaves’ doom

Not mine is the grace of an evergreen
With her proud crest a forest queen
In me you see the twilight of such day
Which is slowly by night taken away
Yet I let not melancholy devour me
I wait patiently for spring’s lively spree
My heart be pierced by rapturous songs
Leaves’ flutter delight of flowery whorls
Emerald branches waving to wooing skies
In mystic sheen a kingly sight!

Comments about The Bare Tree by Yasmeen Khan

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/12/2015 6:41:00 AM)

    Heartfelt poem, neatly written in a descriptive style.....100 on 10. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (9/13/2014 9:23:00 AM)

    Yasmeen's high imagination, lovely description and perfect personification has created a marvelous work of art. i (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (1/1/2014 2:03:00 AM)

    A beautiful descriptive write. (Report) Reply

  • Doris Cornago Doris Cornago (12/30/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    Yes, I agree totally, a fine written form, but already worn imagery. How about a refreshing insight on dying, anybody? (Report) Reply

  • Doris Cornago Doris Cornago (12/30/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    I totally agree. This is indeed a well written poem but already worn imagery. How about a new perspective on dying, anybody? (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (12/30/2013 8:32:00 PM)

    Great imaginary, emotional yet insightful sentiments! (Report) Reply

  • Paddy D Daly Paddy D Daly (12/27/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    picturesque and worded beautifully, your poem gives hope (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr Hans Vr (11/24/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    Wow, this is wonderful. I really enjoyed very much reading this poem. It flows like a river, it sounds like music and it touches the heard. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/23/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Glory to be Allah Praised the world of salvation the dryad nice (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    Beautiful description on life of a tree. Very well penned..Loved it Yasmeen. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair Dinesh Nair (11/19/2013 7:38:00 AM)

    A very powerful poem with beautiful rendering style. The diction is amazingly apt and a clean 10 out of 10 goes here for you Yasmeen (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (11/18/2013 10:54:00 AM)

    Beautifully descriptive of the life of a tree - very well written Yasmeen. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (11/18/2013 6:03:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem Yasmeen. great imagery of trees. (Report) Reply

  • Geetima Baruah Sarma (11/18/2013 1:44:00 AM)

    Optimism beautifully portrayed through these lines...
    'Yet I let not melancholy devour me
    I wait patiently for spring’s lively spree' (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin Sallam Yassin (11/17/2013 8:47:00 AM)

    tone of the season
    in tune of the soul
    depicted within nature
    in every bright (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (11/17/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear friend Zaynub. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/17/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    I havent read a better masterpiece personification of d tree.. Jasmine! How u say n mean, 'leafy lap for nestlings', wow creative! Im so impressd by dis poem i vote 10, ah but yor poem wil b d evergreen tree. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

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