The Birds Of Passage Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Birds Of Passage

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The birds of passage fly
Among the nomads of night
For some years they dwell
Near the bottom of light

Beyond the Nyx's ken
In interstellar space
They detect a sun 'your love'
The leader, our life's pace

(2009/1/29)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 29 January 2009

In interstellar space.. ....................................... Fine this a phrase... Very beautiful poems... 10........ / Thanks for sharing./ Best wishes, Tsira

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Anjali Sinha 29 January 2009

nice poem thanks for sharing -10 anjali

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Very beautiful.I can see the birds and souls in flight.A ten from me.Peace.

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Ency Bearis 29 January 2009

meaningful poem.. after years torments finally had seen the light...10

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C.R. Clark 29 January 2009

A well penned poem, my friend. Thanks Richard

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Allan Macli Borges 09 February 2009

simply a brilliant poem. nice rhymes and sweet reading...10

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Viola Grey 08 February 2009

there is something quite mystical in this one...nice write

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

sweet poem.............lots of wisdom......well penned

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Sandra Fowler 06 February 2009

Brevity is beautiful. The wings of these birds are dipped in sunlight. Warm regards, Sandra

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Chitra - 31 January 2009

through these words I can the see the birds soaring high in the skies of realization

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