Persian Nightingale

The Angel Of Freedom - Poem by Persian Nightingale

Fell asleep
Without lullaby and tale
Rested in peace
Free from sorrow and jail

The whole journey was a nightmare
A lot of despair blood and gore

Now I’m sure
She is glad and secure
In the sky all things are pure

God sings sweet lullaby to her
Where there're no humanoids
To err

(A Memorial to the oppressed martyr, Neda A.S.)


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Comments about The Angel Of Freedom by Persian Nightingale

  • Gold Star - 5,945 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/4/2014 12:40:00 PM)

    it's only in death that we are truly free..make the most of life beautiful tribute to your friend.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (7/23/2014 1:06:00 PM)

    ...........the angel of freedom creates beautiful and peaceful imagery...beautiful write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Surayya Abbas (7/16/2009 2:28:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Allan Macli Borges (7/8/2009 9:03:00 PM)

    dear, it is beautiful! ! ! very touching and writen with truth...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Adi Cox (7/5/2009 2:01:00 AM)

    I like the way this poem ends. It is open ended and invites the reader to ponder all the possible meanings for the word err, in context to what this poem is saying. Humanoids always err. to err is human. err 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rajkumar Mukherjee (7/4/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    DearPersian Nightingale,
    Its a nice tribute with good lmageries, short and sweet.Nice rhyming.I liked the portrayal A10 from me Rajkumar

    I'm still in Singapore but can find time to respond to poet-pals request for comments. Today I posted about 3/4 poems from here. Please find time to read, comment and rate. If possible tell others that I'm back, --Rajkumar (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (6/30/2009 4:21:00 AM)

    A heartfelt tribute, well done,
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Rani Turton (6/30/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    A well-written piece on this sad episode. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (6/30/2009 12:19:00 AM)

    touching tribute.......well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (6/29/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    so she is in safe hand. beautiful
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Sallie Howson (6/28/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    a song of our times...well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jazlle Hugo **contentment is the key to happiness (6/28/2009 4:40:00 AM)

    awesome tribute very touching...thanks

    best regards,
    jdh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/27/2009 10:37:00 PM)

    a very beautiful, refreshing, colurful write indeed nightingale... a great sight for the wounded heart! ! ! ! I ll pay you a 10 for this baeutiful peice! ! !

    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/27/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    a very beautiful, sad and touching poem...will watch now (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 431 Points Ravi A (6/25/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    I haven't heard of this martyr. Yet, I can feel her life through your verses. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (6/25/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    Her life was not pointless! she has touched us all
    she reached our hearts before she took the fall
    her mission on earth has been fufilled
    she in Gods arms, and he is uterly thrilled (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (6/25/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    It is very Important to read everybody in the present situation around us, especially your great country, I am unable to blame anybody but the sufferring huge community`s faith is too bad, praying for her soul to see the almighty, thanks dear,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evaughn Gray (6/24/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    This is a very sad poem, I hope everything gets better for you, others around you, and the ones you love so dearly. ~ Hazel G.E (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/24/2009 7:11:00 PM)

    A marvelous touching poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Christina Clemente (6/24/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    this is a very touching poem that is well written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 18, 2009

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