The Blood In My Veins Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

The Blood In My Veins

Rating: 5.0


playwright or protagonist.
dark confusion at the
bottom of the cosmos.
i fall like a dead weight,
and when i hit, i hit.
watch me as i scream,
like the rain coming
down, and now for the
dramtic climax, it was
only a dream..

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GREAT USE OF IMPACT-LANGUAGE...LOVE THE TITLE...DARKTIMES IN FOOTSTEPS, STILL FOLLOW I THINK....10! '''''''''''FRANK

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GREAT USE OF IMPACT-LANGUAGE...LOVE THE TITLE...DARKTIMES IN FOOTSTEPS, STILL FOLLOW I THINK....10! '''''''''''FRANK

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David Gerardino 21 June 2005

mood swing blues....

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