The Break In Time Poem by Merin Sabu

The Break In Time

Rating: 4.5


Wish I could freeze time, and
listen to a hundred songs by the sea
with the waves whooshing noiselessly
dancing to my tunes.
The salty breeze reassuring the silent break in time,
And the sun, ever so gentle, half beneath the seas.

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my dream- To have peace, and enjoy the little time we share that we call life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 November 2015

Your poem insightfully portrays the peace most people seek when they visits beaches, especially during vacations. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Merin. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Liza Sudina 20 October 2015

Nice dreaam - to freeze time when you are on vacation or like that!

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Merin Sabu 20 October 2015

I guess i'm a slob..i want my life to be like that..!

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