*the Bridge Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

*the Bridge

Rating: 2.7


Forgotten
Dreams flew like kites
The bridge
Below the water ran
In time not reversible
From under the feet
The earth slipped
In hesitation

It went away like seconds
Dusted puffed
There were unknown belongings
On that road
They had listened some calls

The dreams were no more
Either for better
Or they were too big
To fly with
19/3/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 20 March 2009

Beautiful metaphors and similes. Eloquent write, Sadiquallah., more than worthy of a ten. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Fiona Davidson 19 March 2009

Beautiful words Sadiqullah...great read...10++

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