the 'green' in the leaf
nourish the plant as a chef
the sun would provide
[thanks to carl harris]
Three simple lines used to explain the lengthy photosynthesis. Well done.
yes sir! ! ! ! ...you are a great cheff indeed..who give food for our thoughts.....nice write..10++ regards shan
Yes the almighty will provide the sun we provide the chemicals thoughtful regards
This poem is still a senryu, samanyan, as any reference to man eliminates it from being a haiku poem. Your rephrasing of the original version is not quite what I suggested, but this new version makes the same point with the exception of the human term 'chef.' Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
full credit goes to Carl Harris...thanks