The Cigarette Poem by alexander j watt

The Cigarette



when i imbibe
the ash
of a flicker of coal
wrapped in leaf
mixed in air
my whole joy
explodes
and is extinguished
a moment later
by the exhale
leaving just the glowing
wick
of the next explosion

this pistoning
of exhilaration
ruins me,
once i dreamt
i fed a cigarette machine
with my own
quivering flesh
my blood
sticking to my lip
flecks of it on
my teeth
as i coughed
turning white

loudly exclaim
the evil
in a puff of smoke
and be smug
in your glass dome -
don't you understand?
I am no
seedy individual
my way
is the way of
the dragon
i see through his eyes
everything
is in decay
this mortal cylinder
is just another way

I had not smoked for years
untill today

(2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

Sadly I know of two people who have been badly effected by smoking. Some might be lucky but I guarentee you, it has it's effects. Love the impactful statement you made in this line 'the evil of a puff of smoke' Well done.

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 February 2008

Yoonoos is right, this is a fine piece of writing. Communication, communication, communication. Greenwolfe 1962

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Ivor Hogg 23 February 2008

I smoke and have one since I was te years old without any apparent ill effects I am hale and hearty still at 74 My father was a smoker too but gave up for his health at ninety Resuming after a five year break because he felt no better..The anti smoking brigade kill off more people with stress than smoking does

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