allan macli borges

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The City of Sunset and Sunrise Part I


The City of Sunset

The last sun ray touches the earth and go
Breathings of light turn the sky into
An amalgam of all sorted wavelengths
From red to violet all dissolved colors
As dissolved is the happiness of the day
The coldest night falling overwhelming
All around there’s no light to break it
Darkness frightens our body and spirit
Useless eyes dropp tears on their weeping
The city of sunset has at last taken its place

Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009
Edited: Saturday, March 21, 2009

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Comments about this poem (The City of Sunset and Sunrise Part I by allan macli borges )

  • Rookie Grace Guintos (3/23/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    love it..
    you have a nice piece penned as well..
    what do you mean i should not despite? ?
    i cant understand.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanya Stanford (3/22/2009 11:19:00 PM)

    Brilliant use of words. Definately paints a picture in one's mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (3/22/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    A deep imagery; good flow of words. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (3/22/2009 12:38:00 AM)

    Distress flows in this piece, a bit vague on you that reflected your creation. Pity for whatever it is....Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chad Robinson (3/22/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    What? are you in college?
    Got to be, man.
    How do you keep coming up with these masterpieces?
    Keep up the good work, you're gonna be somebody. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Winnie Angel (3/21/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    .....the thought presenting the environ is one of anguish and not of bright colors...but have convey the thoughts clearly...gud one! ..winnie (Report) Reply

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