The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part Ii Poem by allan macli borges
The City Of Sunset And Sunrise Part Ii
The City of Sunrise
But even in the dark we can remember
Although I can not see your mouth right now
I still keep your sparkling smile so tender
In my mind you’re the brightest of the stars
In my hand the touching of your skin so white
We are able to break away with this night
Together we stand to clear up the world around
Out of darkness we will bring the sun back
What is a couple soon will turn into a crowd
Will not be easy but we must to follow this path
In the name of our children we’ll not long for rest.
Again a wonderful imagery. Saying that you can find out her glowing face even in pitch darkness is a very good imagery......very well done........
Now this makes sense, from the unclear thoughts you came up with a bright vivid poem with hope, a beautiful promise of tomorrow.......Well the reading must have the 2 parts, must not displaced the one....10
You're the mann! ! ! ! Bravo, Bravo, Bravo! ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE! ! ! ! !
light happens to emerge out of the darkness with much promise for tomorrow.......loved to read....thanks for sharing! ..
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I love the pleasant pace of this writing. It makes it easy for the reader to follow along. The contents are soothing to the mind and I am certain you will succeed. GW62