The Crescent Moon
tonight when I came back from visiting the sick
I saw the moon waving enthusiastically at me
was it reality or just a fantasy?
the moon was not ashamed
though she was not fully formed
she greeted me enthusiastically
of course, she was lovely
though her body was in crescent form yet
she has already many wonderful reactions as she can get
©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
16 January 2024
Dear Rose Marie, thank you so much for your TOP Marks and that you put my simple poem to your Favourites
Marvellous! Great observation skills. Metaphoric too. Loved it. Top score
I just wrote here my appreciation for you, but those words have not appeared. How is this possible?
Thank you so much for the 5 Stars Full and your compliments, I am happy to see you here again, Unnikrishnan
Liked the picture of the crescent moon attached to this poem. So simple yet very captivating!
I could not find any Crescent Moon picture on Google, so I have put my own simple drawing and photography
The moon in its every form is a wonder and beautiful. Just like every creation, there is always innate beauty. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful poem. Top Marks and to my favorites
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a wonderful poem so spontaneously crafted and beautifully expressed with an underlying message.