The Dark Room Poem by jovan lopez

The Dark Room

Rating: 4.5


There is a dark room
In the corner of your eyes
No doubt what you'll see
A secret place hidden under the
Darkness Caves can't see anything
So dark you walk farther and farther
Can't escape.

Like something is chasing you
Can't see his face so black
Like the darkness skies up above
And download it grabs you can't let go
Tell the end of your suffering
And forgiveness
It won't let go
Hunting you
Until you cry
And weeping
Your eyes softly
It reaches a point
Until you die
You will see
What you have done
It doesn't stop
Until it reaches
You
And the last second you step
It will let go
When you see it
You will be afraid

The Dark Room
Tuesday, February 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: scared
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There is a dark room
In the corner of your eyes
No doubt what you'll see
A secret place hidden under the
Darkness Caves can't see anything
So dark you walk farther and farther
Can't escape.

Like something is chasing you
Can't see his face so black
Like the darkness skies up above
And download it grabs you can't let go
Tell the end of your suffering
And forgiveness
It won't let go
Hunting you
Until you cry
And weeping
Your eyes softly
It reaches a point
Until you die
You will see
What you have done
It doesn't stop
Until it reaches
You
And the last second you step
It will let go
When you see it
You will be afraid
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 February 2016

It reaches a point Until you die You will see What you have done It doesn't stop Until it reaches You darkness inside..... last second step.... it will let go... dramatic. suspense. tony

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 February 2016

an interesting write, Jovan. And, as my friend Souren says, a very well crafted finale. Thanks for sharing

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Jovan Lopez 10 February 2016

You liked it thank you

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Souren Mondal 09 February 2016

'And the last second you step It will let go When you see it You will be afraid' A very well crafted finale of an artistically written poem. Thank you for sharing Jovan.

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