The Date And Time Poem by D.J. Ray

The Date And Time



the date and time
spray painted up on the clock on the wall
once you get far enough up the ladder
you are bound
and obligated to fall
hit your head on the way down
break your legs
once you reach the filthy ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 02 September 2011

You have portrayed a powerful image in a few words..very skillful. Fantastic writing. SG

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in very few words you say alot. i can relate to trhis poem. i really like it. keep it up. i enjoy every piuce you write. i can relate anfd understand it in one way or another. nice job! :)

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2011

I read this twice, and i smile guess i get something :) Nice write though! :) _Unwritten Soul

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D.J. Ray

D.J. Ray

Jonesboro AR
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