The Day Poem by Jewel Workman

The Day



The day you appeared that
was the day i lost my heart
to you.........to love..............to us

From that point in time
i've never been able to shake you
you had a tight hold
onto me..........to love...............to us

In all my heart, all that i have to offer,
i have to love you, to your emotions of 3 words,
and my last days to be wit you
its just
The Day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 September 2009

good one but in the 3rd line from the last 'and my last days to be wit you' should be 'and my last days to be with you' over all----- good!

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