The day I answered your call
Was the day that ended it all
I heard your voice… and then a stall
“We need to talk, ” is when the tears started to fall
As you guiltily spoke,
I knew you had done wrong
And I thought, ”love is a sick joke! ”
And I’ve known so all along
You worried me when and how you changed
My heart since then, has rearranged
I wish that love wasn’t quite so strange
And life passed by with little change
And we’d gaze forever into each other’s eyes
And we’ll know the love that connects us
Instead of suspecting and accusing of lies
And pointing out the faults that infect us
That day that you called
And ended it all
I want you to know that I cried for you
After my aching heart died for you
Love sucks and i know how you feel just keep going with your feelings and the poem is good keep writing.
i believe also when in the situation such as that i usually come to the conclusion that love is a sick game & tons of BS. That was a wonderfully written poem. & ive felt almost exactly like that before. Wonderful Job :) Your A Great Poet, Keep it up. Much Love. Shelby Marie.
i loved it so much Brittany it was wonderful. well done.
THIS POEM IS SOOO....SAD.....AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY YOU! ... i like it a lot....specially the first para.....keep writing such beautiful poems.. as 'this is how i feel about life' said, love will lead to a lot of pain, but it will never die.... i myself hated love before, because it brought along with it a lot of sadness and tears and fears, ....but that was because it wasnt true love...when true love shows itself to us....we will no longer have to cry... you will find a person worth your every tear...but the fascinating part is that you will never hev to cry when you have this love with you.. take care Nia
a like this poem nice love poetry love always turns to pain ALWAYS
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love leads to hurt and pain...but love can never die