The Day You Left Poem by jasmine Johnson

The Day You Left

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The day you left,
Made a flashback to when we met.
In the park,
After dark.

The day you left,
Is when I sat on our favorite bench.
I remembered our first kiss,
That’s what I’ll miss.

The day you left,
Made me a mess.
I cried and cried,
You were my first good-bye.

The day you left,
November 25th.
Our last kiss,
I’m glad you shown me what love is.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gerald Sedillo 22 March 2010

Unalloyed love... maybe using imagery not directly connected to relate the other image and a departure from AABB rhyme schemes can help your poetry grow.

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