Unsteady quiet, lonely as it sounds,
Avoided like a plague
It’s the dead of silence
One thing said, another’s yell
Fault is really very vague,
In this dead of silence
Watching you walk out
Every time I walk in
I feel this be my own fate
Alone, in the silence
I should have said nothing
My feelings never heard
I chanced it this time and now pay dearly
For my love only leaves me
This dead silence.
Talk about lonely, this was a poem that took its sweet time getting posted... found this very haunting, and certainly have been there before... know what you're talking about. I try to avoid it like the plague too. Good pacing, brings out the lonely aspect, which you achieved easily... I don't know if that's a compliment though lol Great job sis! Lee
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I would like to translate this poem
Sentimental but emotionally sound.... hurt can be felt in dead silence, makes one reminisce the monent a love one leaves. Splendid work. another 10.