The Dear Departed Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Dear Departed

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Life has been
A heap of leaves
Dry and drenched,
Shed over centuries
Over the valleys of
My lost hopes and
Dreams shattered.

What made you think
The way that you did
The way that you fled
Away from the world-
You knitted with love,
You designed with care,
So delicately woven and tied?

Often I embark
While gazing far
At the end of my horizon
From the ends to ends of
My space and time line
Are hollowness filling them
Every inch of my volume,
Every cell of my being..! !


Where do I find you
In the eyes dreamy that surround
Or the hearts sobbing in and around!
Where have you been
My darling Dee, Will you ever
Blink your eyes shut and flee
Again into and within me?

Saturday, March 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

My lost hopes and dreams shattered! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you revered Sir for the loving remarks on the poem.

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Anita Aparajita Das 19 May 2016

Often I embark While gazing far At the end of my horizon From the ends to ends of My space and time line Are hollowness filling them Every inch of my volume, Makes me feel a high pitch of painful note. Thanks Subhas for creating the spell. 10 for this. Nitu.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for the loving remarks on the poem.

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alan brown 20 April 2018

thank you for posting enjoyed your poem Subhas.Alan

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

A stanza full of the fulfilment she might have given you while she was with you. Liked it much. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

A stanza full of the fulfilment she might have given you while she was with you. Liked it much.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 27 February 2018

From the ends to ends of My space and time line Are hollowness filling them Every inch of my volume, Every cell of my being..! ! Lovely crafting.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

A beautiful poem on love describing the pure passion within your kind and loving heart.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for the loving remarks and inspiration.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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