The Deep Sea Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Deep Sea

Rating: 5.0


Enormous dreams as ghosts on horizon
soul in troubled waters
without the sails and a broken rudder.
New Moon guides with twinkling stars.
a Mermaid's song en route the passage
and gives strength to survive.
Lighthouse is unlit
and the Love country is not visible yet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 14 July 2006

This is stunning and guess what nimal I can see your light on our horizon your there See? This is beautiful and so worth the read Love duncan x

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Joe Breunig 25 June 2006

A beautiful and haunting piece; it's no wonder that men fall in love with the sea.

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Leigh A. Hill 20 May 2006

this is just beautiful! paints a perfect mellow picture in my mind with each stroke of words. love starr

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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