The Differece Poem by sekharan pookkat

The Differece

Rating: 5.0


In and around
Young looks pretty
And ignore all
And lock face to face.

But old
Subdue emotions
Pressing hands softly
And make a soundless smile
Keeping around
To Coil them
In vibrant sighs.

Sunday, August 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: old age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Interesting how you describe the young locking face to face - in other words kissing. Older more mature people are able to control their emotions when together, holding hands, smiling at one another. Not quite sure what you mean by the last line, What I thought it might mean didn't make sense. Thank you though for sharing. RoseAnn

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 August 2015

An astute contrast between the two which are poles apart.

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