The Empty Space Left Behind Poem by Anita Atina

The Empty Space Left Behind

Rating: 5.0


She had found something special
Treasure or curse, she couldn’t tell, as yet

This magical canvas pulsed with a life of its own,
Vibrant colours adorned thick edges, hiding layered emotion

She was hypnotised by colours whirling,
Churning and blending in a mad medley, near the centre

Forming a bright halo, speckled with dark gliding shadows
Before tumbling and spinning again

At the very centre, white space poised still
Its hushed presence a surprise, amidst the coloured hustle

Was this the empty space, she'd left behind?
Or was it a door to the future, which beckoned

Drawing her in, with mystery unknown
Tempting her to paint desires

To dream of colours that would
Transform emptiness, into a future bold

This empty space was magical, she knew
For as soon as her brush strokes rested

The colours would stay awhile,
Before tip-toeing away

To join that mad medley of
Colours whirling, churning and blending

To create a moving chiaroscuro,
That was her life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 24 March 2009

Very clever write full of interesting ideas, our lives are blank canvases and we can do what we will 10+++

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Indira Babbellapati 24 March 2009

empty space so well described in crisp couplets...njoyd reading!

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