Hazel Durham

The Essence Is You - Poem by Hazel Durham

Lover of life, every man dreamt of you being his wife,
Long blond hair shimmering in the sunlight,
A golden face, forever smiling,
You held the reins of your destiny,
Your choice was love, as your soul ran free,
Cherishing the roots that made you,
When you disappeared the sun was blotted out,
Dark clouds brooding over the town,
Suspicions, hearsay and rumours abound,
Forces unknown had swallowed you up,
No trace remains of the flower that was you,
Only sadness and death is left on the doorstep,
The essence lingers long over a midland throng,
The essence is you watching from heavens view.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is a tribute to Fiona Pender who went missing from her home in Tullamore, County Offaly, Ireland sixteen years ago. Remembering Fiona and all the other women who are still missing in Ireland.

Comments about The Essence Is You by Hazel Durham

  • Gold Star - 52,850 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2015 3:14:00 PM)

    You are the nice essence in lover's life and you are destiny oh God. The essence is you watching from heavens view. Very interesting poem shared really. Nice sharing...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 28,915 Points Kim Barney (10/14/2015 4:51:00 PM)

    Lovely sonnet and beautiful tribute. Especially loved lines seven and eleven. Very ell done. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 958 Points Martina Moriarty Mc Carthy (9/28/2015 1:39:00 PM)

    Beautiful thoughts xxx Martina (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,100 Points Mary Mc Creath (9/23/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to a person known and loved. I enjoyed your poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,818 Points Chinedu Dike (9/2/2015 9:26:00 AM)

    A lovely memorial that touches the heart with selectively placed words. Piece of great elegance Hazel. Thanks for writing this poem in remembrance of the teenager and others who went missing. Remain blessed. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 887 Points Gary H (8/8/2015 3:46:00 PM)

    Very sad and well done liked it thats for true. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 479 Points Yewande Adedokun (7/21/2015 9:42:00 AM)

    I love The Essence of You and the caution of sadness that be gets every beautiful thing (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,327 Points Hannington Mumo (7/18/2015 1:26:00 AM)

    Yes, death leaves no trace....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,718 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/6/2015 3:56:00 PM)

    A sad story of loss yet a creative and compelling composition. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,497 Points Clarence Prince (5/17/2015 3:38:00 PM)

    A great tribute to Fiona Pender!
    whatever happen to her it's sad!
    Thanks for sharing, Hazel! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (5/11/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    so lovely and beautiful lines (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 715 Points Lajpat Chawla (4/30/2015 3:17:00 AM)

    When you disappeared the sun was blotted out,
    Dark clouds brooding over the town,
    So mesmerizing.Who is the lucky guy? (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,728 Points Stephen Katona (4/26/2015 7:21:00 PM)

    A beautiful tribute. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 554 Points James Fitzpatrick (1/6/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem, and it must tell a story I would love to know about. If it was lyrical it would probably lose it's dept but might sing. Wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,462 Points Valsa George (9/13/2014 12:23:00 AM)

    Congratulations on this poem being selected as poem of the day! A poignant write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,753 Points Daniel Brick (9/12/2014 11:01:00 PM)

    This is a remarkable sonnet. Although the subject is tragic, the writing of it is assured, focused, deep, with no trace of false feeling. You did not let anything mar our impression of this young woman, she is a victim and deserves complete sympathy. The line WHEN YOU DISAPPEARED THE SUN WAS BLOTTED OUT cut me to the quick, and then the despair of NO TRACE REMAINS OF THE FLOWER THAT YOU WERE. This is the kind of poem that opens hearts. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,509 Points Lyn Paul (9/12/2014 6:16:00 PM)

    A moving write with your notes giving us the complete story. Thank you Hazel, I remembered these words. All your poems could be poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (9/12/2014 12:40:00 PM)

    Congrats! It touched my heart.A great tribute indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,757 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (9/12/2014 11:28:00 AM)

    Very well composed touching my heart indeed..........Hazel......10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,814 Points Mr. Agape (9/12/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    I guess we all start as lovers of life,
    it comes and it goes and the wheel
    of sadness keeps rolling.
    This place is about suffering
    creation will always be karmic
    and the wheel keeps rolling...

    nice write, as always! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 22, 2012

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