Kathy J Anderson

I naturally, didn't like this one that much.
Your rhyme is still there but while you can
end a verse anyway you choose. Remember,
there is always someone who must read what
you write. The last sounds of a verse echo
through a poem. These lines must have a
sound that the human ear finds pleasing.
Unfortunately, your ending lines here do not.

I still love your work.
Greenwolfe 1962

This is very good. short but to the point. I like the simple rhyme and the idea it conveys.
The power of a look........
Roger.x