! ! ! The Faith Of Tomorrow! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! The Faith Of Tomorrow! ! !

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The sky blue how lovely to earth green tales by the grin
is it not gleams of hope by the urgency of dream
you showed me the light in the molten dark of cruised passion
days I remember the rising sun diffuses over dew of dawn

warmth still stashed in its room of reason unknown
snow when stares into the room I may not share
age may not fall by its own wishes dehiscing the blue
reeks of shadow turn to pieces impaling the clouds by rain

clear sky ever opens its door of deliverance by transparency of truth
the desire when metamorphosed by the heavenly bliss
the path when scrupled by the blessing in desire as ahead
dregs of whispers promise a semblance of love unknown before

rose when holds on latching on to the dreams of new day even in storm
as the vivid flash of thunder yet livid over the green cornfield
earth still tautens its buoyancy of confidence breaking the shadow
yet hope of vision on shore braces up tempting the faith of tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 August 2008

i've the faith of tomorrow....the exotic tomorrow.......as exotic as your poem.

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Anjali Sinha 10 August 2008

nice phrases---specially this one 'dregs of whispers promise a semblance of love unknown before' Keep sharing such beautiful lines. regards anju

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Anjali Sinha 10 August 2008

Oh Yeah ++++++10 to you

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Ramesh T A 12 August 2008

It confirms that man lives in dreams and can't be stopped to live well tomorrow!

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Shruti Modi 13 August 2008

u live and dream....u see future...10 for sure!

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BEAU GOLDEN 28 October 2008

I feel you are capturing a large part of images we all strive to evoke

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

WOW.. BLISSFUL.... :)

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Ashley Ormon 07 October 2008

Beautiful poem. Nice flow.

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Indira Renganathan 23 August 2008

truthful verses.....very nice.Thanks for sharing

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Nicole Moore 22 August 2008

i like this poem. great job!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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