The Fear Poem by Mary Forrester

The Fear

Rating: 4.0


From the corner of my eye
And the stillness of the evening
I saw a reflection
Of something really evil
My heart began to race
As I took up the pace
I stumbled over slabs and stones
Then fell upon my face
The blood began to poor
As I lay upon the floor
Screaming God help me
I heard the pitter patter
Saw the furry matter
Closely followed by teeth and claws
Frozen from the fear
I watched him scamper clear
And thanked The Lord that I'm still here

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a parody of people's reaction to mice.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 06 June 2014

Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the note. The fear and its effects have been well depicted.

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John Brown 11 September 2013

Almost a horror story this. It's big fat spiders that scare me.

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Heather Wilkins 01 September 2013

fear not GOD is always near. lovely wrte

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