The Filthy Rich Window Shopper Poem by Poker Chips

The Filthy Rich Window Shopper

Rating: 5.0


My phone vibrates, my hearts on dagger tips
Dagger to my heart, The name isn’t yours
Its Killing me, Single is still your status
Single is also mine, Window shopping
Amazed my eyes must be playing tricks on me
So beautiful u could have inspired god to make the earth
I just stare from behind the glass
I would have you, if u could be bought
Money aint everything and its nothing if I cant have you
So I Just Continue To Window Shop

You spending time with me is a fortune to my hearts wallet
I Can take the gamble and possibly lose it all
Have my hearts wallet empty a broke heart
Or if that dice rolls seven must be sent from heaven
But I just hold the dice itching to make a roll
Rather off make you mine and that the boogie man under the bed when I was young
Fearing most losing you 4ever
Gamble The Friendship For a relationship not to down with water I just a need a ship
Your already a fortune to my hearts wallet Does this make me greedy?
Will you be my girl, Unsure….
So I Just Continue to Window Shop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 13 June 2009

beautiful composition on window shopping..looking for a lover is like a window shopping, ..beautiful poem..nice to read..grace

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Innovatively intensive. Well done my friend.

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Catrina Heart 17 June 2009

Very innovative...great imagination here! Upbeat to the modern world of writers...10+++

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Ency Bearis 17 June 2009

You did a good job in writing your introspection, but something to observe your meter with your poetic format (shorten some stanza) , and needs to be careful to address the noun..god should be God...it should starts with capital letter...its a good start..keep on writing....

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Deborah Cromer 16 June 2009

I read both of your poems. I like how your mind and heart can speak through your soul. I love that you can put that out on paper. Writing is a gift that sometimes is all we have. You can do that. It's yours and will always be there for you. I'm glad you shared with me. You are welcome to read me too. Deborah Cromer

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Nic Leisure 16 June 2009

very touching and a nice flow. with it, good to read...10.. nice work

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