The First Dose Poem by alyssa bradford

The First Dose

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The first dose of love
is always amazing.
the prescription can never be refilled
you take it once.
We don't know where we are headed
and what we've gotten ourselves into.
the first dose of love is
magnificent, and beautiful,
but horrible, and tragic. the end of it surely will come.
The first dose is...
out-of-mind
its undecided
its... undescribable

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 27 July 2010

Very clever piece. Interesting to see you push your ideas across common interest and explore it really good. Am very impressed at your expressive skills. well done 10

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