The Flame Poem by Tina MacAdam

The Flame

Rating: 4.0


The flame on the candle flickers
Creating shadows on the wall
The wax melts
It forms a pool as it hits the water
Close your eyes
Take a deep breath
Feel the rush of relief
As it flows into the water
The swirl of wax and blood
The pain and the silence
The shadows on the wall
Watch as everything fades
The flame dies
Everything grows dark

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 16 September 2009

Another well written poem that has depth & shows much emotions felt. Good Job. Ravensong

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