The Flower Of Swooners Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

The Flower Of Swooners

Rating: 3.0


Is The Violet,
in season in June down south.
Its delicious scent is barely a taint;
you breathe it in till you almost faint.

The Flower Of Swooners
Monday, June 21, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: season,lovesick,flower
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
22.6.21. Hyperventilation. Far south, that is: South Australia.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 22 June 2021

The last line is s bit of an exaggeration. The rest of the poem reads much better.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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