Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points (Baltimore, Maryland)

The Forever Of You - Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

The forever of you
Is in between all I do...
In a passing field of flowers
In the morning sky,
You are to me, a soft
Enchanting lullaby.
You are ever in my thoughts;
Oh! the clamor that invades
The empty spaces
When we are apart.

Comments about The Forever Of You by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

  • Gold Star - 4,515 Points Ken E Hall (5/2/2015 7:46:00 AM)

    Perfect words of love you ring out parting is such sweet sorrow with a loving lilt...thankyou and regards (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,682 Points Hannington Mumo (4/23/2015 7:42:00 AM)

    I like the simplicity of your flow and the mastery of your thought. I rate it 10/10... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,149 Points Elena Sandu (4/19/2015 6:54:00 PM)

    So happy to find you on the first page dear singing Dorothy! More of your poems deserve to be here, love the gentle way you warm the hearts with the most beautiful lullabies! Thank you for sharing, always a pleasure to read your poems! (Report) Reply

    Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/20/2015 11:03:00 AM)

    I am so excited to have had my poem chosen for the first page. Thank you for your lovely comment!
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing

  • Gold Star - 7,094 Points Francis Lynch (4/19/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    Especially enjoy the economy of words, and the minimalistic approach. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,577 Points Brian Stafford (4/19/2015 9:27:00 AM)

    congrats on the poem and getting poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,409 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (4/19/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    congratulations for the poem of the day. Saying that you are ever in thoughts it sounds very pleasing. Wonderful poem shared.10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,777 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/19/2015 3:54:00 AM)

    Young Lady, I do believe this site has chosen a most polished and eloquent poem to begin this early Sunday morning in April...I'm back here on PH...PF really became a FREAK SHOW...of the 3rd Kind! ! ! I can't operate under such an infantile & counter productive environment...Besides, all, or the mass majority of our Inner Circle is long gone, probably for the same reason as I boogied....Hope all is well in your world missy! Keep in touch, and while you're at it...consider a move over here...Your skills & contributions are sorely needed & will be surely welcome...Frank (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,364 Points Luis Estable (4/19/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    A good and lovely try this is with a beautiful ending. I rejoice at the beauty of the diction that is seen all through the poem.

    Luis Estable (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,255 Points Kelly Kurt (4/19/2015 1:07:00 AM)

    a lovely poem, Dorothy. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Twilight Whispers (4/11/2008 10:40:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem, you make us understand your feelings in so few words.
    Thank you for your comments on my poem.
    -TW- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Iris Washington (3/22/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    I Love this poem. So sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mike Kosman (4/5/2007 6:54:00 AM)

    What a beautiful way to put such beautiful thoughts and feelings. A wonderful poem

    Mike (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (4/5/2007 5:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful just beautiful poem... Dorothy..10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 10, 2011

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