* The Freedom-Sky Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* The Freedom-Sky

Rating: 3.7


The Freedom-Sky

Do not fly highly, do not fly, my birdie- tiny...
Only for big predators blossom heavens any...
And if you it is possible to manage harmlessly...
Heart will not sustain pleasure of freedom-sky...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 22 September 2009

Tsira, wonderful poem, loved the message within. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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Alison Cassidy 29 September 2009

In this concise, puzzle of a poem, the message is loud and clear - little birds should be wary of venturing too high - for fear of predators that rule the sky. Lovely message. Lovely poem. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Pranab K Chakraborty 06 November 2010

And if you it is possible to manage harmlessly... Heart will not sustain pleasure of freedom-sky... Fantastic observation with intellectual analysis of the caption. Hundred percent truth. Really astonishing! The little writing about freedom-sky ends with such wisdom! Beautiful hypothesis to project a crying-need of the human soul and society. Thank you for the boldness of uttering such truth with the fragrance of poetry. ....10/10 Regards, pranab

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Deodath Debideen 04 November 2009

I loved this. Your cautions are well advised. Yet, I advise that the loins be girded for battle. Aren't we on the same page?

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Lynda Robson 06 October 2009

A charming write, if the bird flies too high the bigger predator will get him, unique and quite lovely, 10 Lynda xx

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Enchanting and beautiful poem and I love the title. I like the philosophy of taking care and being aware of predators. Top marks...

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2009

In your fragility lies your greatest strength. Always fly, Tsira. Very touching. Love, SandraX

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