! ! ! The Glow Of The Green! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! The Glow Of The Green! ! !

Rating: 3.9


Grace unequalled in my earthly eyes,
dream when snuffles into ocean blue,
dust inflames, as fire stashes in the hide
across the mystery of the jingle’s brim.

warmth cradles the glow of the green
voices when curves the shape of grin
heart revels by the words of whisper
night never refrained of gentle breath.

moments expense in gleams of light
scarlet rose shelters in room of repose
passion wades through reeks of lone void
the blue yet flecks into the plumes afloat....'

breeze flows trudging through the riffs
reeks may intone assailing the flow
yet the sultry dream serenades the cliff
as the wild stream brooks by the eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 24 August 2008

Yet another capturing read Dr.Kar! Elegant wording, delightfully expressive! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Awesome! ! ! ! The imagery are very nice, the flow and used of words are very interesting.10+++++++ for this. best regards, joan d.h.

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Shalini Kts 26 August 2008

poem is so clean and green, with words flowing like river, ....

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Marieta Maglas 18 June 2009

a visual metaphor: ''voices when curves the shape of grin'' of a wonderful descriptive poem of color...well written..10++

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 31 August 2008

An interesting and good write. I have enjoy reading it.

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Anjali Sinha 31 August 2008

aha-- at last I see the shades of the vibrant green. 'warmth cradles the glow of the green' nice write +++10 regards anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

...a compact and amazing expression indeed..........10+

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, aryaindia 29 August 2008

Really, such a beauty within your write. I also feel that if you leave the poem with less articles of speech, your work would be even more enticing and succulent in its grasp. arya.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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