The Green Forgotten Valleys Poem by Tom O'Brien

The Green Forgotten Valleys

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THE GREEN FORGOTTEN VALLEYS

Those green forgotten valleys,
No longer can be seen
Lying hidden behind the tall fir and larch
That have made these brown hills green
Relentlessly marching down the hills
Burying everything in their wake
The dead are long gone from this place
The pike no longer in the lake
The houses just hollow shells now
Where the past ghosts eerily through
The vacant windows and doors
With rotted frames and jambs that once were new.
Back then there was no silence, only the sound
Of human laughter, and bird-calls to each other
The dogs growling at a wayward sheep.
And children's scrapes kissed better by their mother
Nature is having the last laugh now
Soon there will be no trace of us at all
As the trees come marching down the hillside
No one hears the lonesome curlew's call.

Monday, November 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom O'brien 29 November 2016

Thanks you for your kind words, Kathy. I did know such a place; not to live in, it had been 'deserted' long before my time, but I used to visit it occasionally and wonder what it had been like before nature had reclaimed it

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Chinedu Dike 28 November 2016

An insightful depiction of utter decay and dilapidation of once vibrant valley, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Tom.

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Tom O'brien 29 November 2016

glad you enjoyed it, Chinedu!

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