The Guilt Circle. Poem by MaddiiAnne O'Leary

The Guilt Circle.



When there is Guilt,
There is Pain.
When there is Pain,
There are Tears.
When there are Tears,
There are the Unshed ones.
When there are Unshed tears,
There are Friendships that end.
When Friendships end,
There is Betrayal.
When there is Betrayal,
There is Guilt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lindbergh Hughes 25 July 2010

Nice and interesting poem! ! The way that the circle starts and ends show us that, sometimes, the cure for a problem is exact where it starts.Nothing is better than to cut the evil on its roots.

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Lateesha G 09 June 2010

Madds i love your poems. Cant wait till we work on some more. Ive decided on some more subjects so it should be interesting

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