The Half Bottle Poem by ismael subba

The Half Bottle

Rating: 3.0


A kid
kicks a
half filled bottle...
It passes by
a blind poet
thinking about humanity....

He imagines
The half filled bottle
human brain....
make sounds a lot
though half filled....
or if its empty..

but never
creates grumpy
irritating voice
when its full...

Humans can only
make sounds....
shout louder
create voices
like the half filled bottle....

the bottle goes
to the direction
kicked
In the same way
human minds travels
where it is led
by hollow words..

the kid
laughs at bottle....
along with him
laughs poet...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ismael Subba 03 September 2015

thankyou mohammad ji for inspiring review

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2015

Nicely written......I liked it. If u find time please review my poems.

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