the Hunter. Poem by Geoffrey Fafard

the Hunter.

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I remember the Mysore road
Out past Brindivan Dam
I remember the old diesel Desoto
Chugging, taking us to the tanks
I remember the beer
Wrapped in the Times of India
For morning tea
It was an eye opener for me
Pretending to be tough
But still such a kid
Wet behind the ears
What do I do with this shotgun?
Get us dinner my young lad
Fingers pointing to the sky
Perhaps it was my good fortune
That the Russian ammunition
We tried to fire
Was old, mostly a fizzer
Most of the ducks lived
None the less I still picked shot
Out of my teeth later at dinner
Whilst the cooks hid in the kitchen
For fear of reprisal….!
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My first taste of India 1981
So exciting for a young new traveller
I have learnt lots since then
Ducks are safe around me now
Only in my memories am I
A wild hunter.

Monday, February 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hunting,indian,memory,youth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I lay in the long grass the other wet day whilst ducks swam by me
in the lake. An amateur lunatic wouldn't know if I was laughing or crying…
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Ahern 25 February 2019

The ducks would know Geoffrey, thank you as always for your amazing story telling.

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Geoffrey Fafard 26 February 2019

Thank you John. I appreciate your words. Geoffrey.

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Richard D Remler 12 February 2019

love the storytelling. Talented pen. This is a great piece of writing. tfs

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Geoffrey Fafard 12 February 2019

Thank you Richard for your reaction to this poem.I appreciate it very much.Cheers, Geoffrey.

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