The Hurt In Her Heart. Poem by millie st.claire

The Hurt In Her Heart.

Rating: 5.0


When she goes home everyday.
She realizes she worked too hard to just let it all fall
Everyday the same game.
Wake up, go to school, put on a fake smile, come home, and study.

No one ever notices how sad she truly is, because of that fake smile.
Her heart is broken, her soul is shattered.

And its all because of him.
He never cared.
Never tried to fix things.
He just wanted her hurt.

And it worked.all those years of trying to be strong, and have her wall up.
He was the one guy, she let in.
And look what he did to her.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

wow. that guy sucks. sensitive piece.

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Bobbie Jo ..... 01 July 2008

nice one..it shows how hard sum1 can work and ones dont appreciate it..

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Bill Thomas 30 June 2008

Good work, Millie - one can really feel the pain of betrayal. Keep writing! !

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Chris Newlash 30 June 2008

That's a very sad story

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