The Last Breath! ! ! ! Poem by yahya z k

The Last Breath! ! ! !

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The last breath! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


The last breath is like an ending world
Seeing your past in illusion

Do the good deeds
Do the bad deeds

You will see your ending sequence
In a way you will be punished by god or saved

But the death will be waiting for you
To hug you, kill you!

The world is like a test
It will test your endurance

If you succeed in the test
You will be granted with heaven

If you fail
You will be granted HELL!

It doesn’t matter but what matters is you
Don’t destroy the life you have

Enjoy enjoy
Laugh laugh

It will make a difference you will feel
Pure from envy, jealousy and hatred

Let’s just say enjoy the life you have
Before the god calls your life!



By:
Dragon. Killer
(Yahya)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aliziah 31 December 2018

i'm sorry it was horrible it just was not as good as me i make better poems and i am nine

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abbygail 17 December 2018

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Alfonz Capone 08 April 2009

great poem man but i feel the opposite way u have sum good points keep it up Homie......Peace!

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Aldo Kraas 20 March 2009

Excelent work. Please keep up with your writing.

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very interesting work keep writing my friend

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