The Liquid Path Poem by Igor Balatsky

The Liquid Path

Rating: 5.0


The river of tears
in the ocean of stars
We are here
on its different banks
walking the edge
of liquid path
two naked souls
still all alone
But we will try
to overcome
ant we'll survive
in the new bodies
of spring water
Just do your best
my sweetheart
'cause we've refused
to stay the humans
apart
for liquid minds
so live and flexible
for being together
in the twinkling eyes
of eternity


'The Way of Grass' (2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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