The Lost Wish! ! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Lost Wish! !



A little child, her daughter's age,
came to her mind in her last bed,
she was very frightened and shivered,
for she asked her niece to look,
after her own children,
while she slept,
when she was young,
some sixty years ago,

she was too regretful,
as her deeds are counted,
and colored in gold and black,
she wanted to seek forgiveness,
from the old lady who stood beside her,
wiping the tears, calling her aunt,

she wanted to reach her hand,
she couldn't,
she wanted to open the mouth
to utter the words of sorry,
she couldn't,
she wanted to hold the breathe,
to say sorry,
but she couldn't..

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 September 2015

The persona, depicted in this poem is a real person who is in the last stretch of her life and she mentioned to her loved ones that she wanted to seek forgiveness from her niece who was under her care for the actions she assumed that was wrong, before she has gone into coma. When I see both the aunt and the niece together in the hospital, this poem erupts in my mind. We are responsible for our actions irrespective of good and bad and we may one day do the same, but the action mentioned here es only “just asked the niece to babysit”

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 September 2015

she passed away peacefully on 29th September 2015,

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