A little lady cardinal
One morning perched upon my deck,
Spying the seeds I had placed there,
Hungrily, she began to peck
Soon she was joined by her lover,
With his "tweetheart" he came to dine;
What a lovely couple they made,
Standing there underneath the pine
I stood in awe of their courtship,
Then came a moment of mystique -
Lovingly, he took a peanut
And gently placed it in her beak
His wing lifted to caress her,
So much in love they seemed to be;
Tears started to well in my eyes,
Seeing love's pure simplicity
Suddenly, there appeared a hawk,
A dark shadow touring the sky,
All chirping hushed, fear filled the air,
And then sounded the warning cry
All the birds in the area
Sought trees, left and right they did veer,
But little lady cardinal
Just sat there, paralyzed with fear
Death was gliding on wings outspread,
Lady cardinal in his sight;
Then down he swooped to claim his prize,
Suddenly her lover took flight
Up he flew into death's cold grasp,
Downward fluttered a tattered wing;
Satisfied with his handsome catch,
The hawk soared away, revelling
The red bird gave his life for love,
But his bravery was not in vain,
Each dawn finds his lady grieving,
Singing for him her sad refrain
1 - I didn't know females could be made Cardinals. Reading this line made me cringe! (i 'love' birds) This one: " Up he flew into death's cold grasp, " I'm glad you used " revelling" , and did not FORCE a rhyme with " wing" . I suppose i could accept, instead, " A victory cry it did sing." (cont.)
The poem tells a beautiful love tale. Each stanza is outstanding. Flawless!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(cont.) 2 – If her lover had not sacrificed himself, she wouldn't have to be sad " each dawn" , that is: until a new lover came along. To MyPoemList. Lora, another fantastic poem; you DO have a few others. Bri ;)