The Mistakened Past Poem by Mariam Daoud

The Mistakened Past

Rating: 5.0


The one you are dying to change
Oh how life passes by so fast
Doesn't give you a chance to correct

And oh her eyes
Those mad eyes of stone
Rock hard with anger
And the growing frustration
Scaring me...

Then those eyes
Oh those mad eyes of stone
become sad eyes of tears
softened with sorrow
And now growing grief

And oh her eyes
They tear me with guilt
They tear me with apologies
They tear me with loneliness
But I have hurt her
And I have no chance of changing what I did
And as I try to pick it up
Her broken heart remains scattered on the floor.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
And of course, everyone has made a mistake. I myself, have made several. The people I do it to sometimes never forgive me, and thankfully, sometimes they do. Recently I have made a big mistake, and the person I hurt while doing it has hatred towards me. Well this is my way of expressing how I feel.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Everyone makes mistakes..forgive yourself first and then accept apologies..nice poem..a ten

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Mariam Daoud 21 March 2014

To Gajanan Mishra: Thank you for the comment, and that you actually bothered reading my poem. Makes me feel proud.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 March 2014

broken heart remains scattered, good writing.

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