Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 83 Points (Montenegro)

The Moment - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

The moment I've been found
is the moment I've been lost
fragmental self frozen
no longer me
far away I flow
the rivers too fast for a step

Comments about The Moment by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Rookie - 83 Points Miroslava Odalovic (11/23/2011 11:29:00 AM)

    Wow, thank you Unwritten I just posted a sequel to this :) , it's a very nice heart felt comment poem you wrote, perhaps I am wise (sometimes? ? ? ?) lol but you are certainly the SOul. 'cos you can make a person smile, would like to exchange that for 'wisdom' you're referring to :) (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,467 Points Unwritten Soul (11/23/2011 9:36:00 AM)

    One day you will reach one point, a moment....
    a moment to tied all the moments of past..
    a moment that bear all the lessons, happy and pain
    everything you lost and gain
    in a moment
    the moment when you get wiser than ever and rise
    like everything related in one as memory

    You always wise when writing, like it much :) :) :)
    Smile always for better days! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten SOul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2011

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