The Mountain Peak Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Mountain Peak

Rating: 4.8


The great mountain peak
Covered with the whitest snow
Sun hits the mountain
The peak shines like a queen's crown
It enhances her power.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2020

This is an amazing panorama the great poetess has described.. Once I stood on such a mountain peak, almost 28000 m high, I still can feel the coolness of the wind and how proud I became because of the enchanting mountain peak Since the peak shines like a queen's crown, my body and whole being got affected too, standing there on that mountain peak. It was in Serfaus, my place to go for skiing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2020

2) Very imaginable this scintillating view from that Mountain Peak. You used the words " like a queen's crown" in your poem this reminds me a loveliest meeting in the supermegacity Mumbay, we sat at the Mumbai-bay and under our legs was the Queen's Neklace visible. That's why the impressive poem you created has brought so many most beautifult associations with it. A 10 Full Score for this scintillating poem and to MyPoemsList.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2020

The power of nature! ! Romantic hour with the peak of the mountain! ! ! Muse of the snow; To speak out your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 03 July 2020

Mountains, the crown of Nature....beautiful poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2020

A wonderfully penned poem. Simply magnificent...10++❤️❤️❤️

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2022

Magnificent. Liked the prudent use of simile. Top score

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Anjandev Roy 09 May 2021

It enhances her power......significant...

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

snow acts like a veil on the naked body of the mountain beautiful painting

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 July 2020

.I am so very sorry, Mrs. Juan Austin, I am bad in arithmatic, but to write 28000 m high instead of 2800 m, that's my worst arithmatic I encounter. Once again, my deepest apologization. I am not boasting, it's just a shameful mistake. Have an enjoyable day.

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Shaun Cronick 04 July 2020

Nature's beauty, beautifully thought up and delivered in a poem of timeless enchantment. 10++ and may you Rose Marie enjoy life and take solace from life and poetry and its many great virtues. Take care and thank you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

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Laoag City, Philippines
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